The Locked Maze 2: Page 8
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Medium: SketchBookPro/Photoshop
Size: 8.5X11"
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This page has been the bane of my existence for the past month. I have redrawn it, scrapped it, redrawn it, redrawn it... It never seemed to work out the way I wanted. :/ But this is just going to have to do, because I am sick of it and want to move on. :P
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I dunno what the problem is, this page is loverly specially the colours in the first and last panels.
Loving the story
M
Really? I just started reading this from the beginning and I think this is my favourite page so far. I like how she subtly pops out from the crowd and how you overlapped negative space in for the laughter. Overlapped negative space? I'm pretty sure I said that wrong.
Sketchd
I liked the negative space too - that was fun to experiment with. My biggest problems were in drawing Holly in the first panel (I could not get her to look right, even with reference photos) and the feet in the last panel. And the colors never gelled together. Like, the panels are all fine on their own, but together they don't look like they were meant to combine as a whole. Page 6 looks like it was all painted together (since, it was), but this one was so obviously done in pieces. :/ Anyway, still has some great bits.